Taken in order...
1) 'It's' instead of 'it's' 2) 'Complusory' instead of 'comulsory 3) "but...!" instead of 'but!..." (if you MUST!) 4) This is a tough one.... you CANNOT start a sentence with 'but' but, if you insist on your weird punctuation, it SHOULD have been 'But'. Oh, and by the way, that IS one the cases where 'but' CAN be followed by a 'comma'; sub-clauses and all that! 5) "message, but "..... No, no, NO! That is NOT an occasion when you ARE allowed to have a comma preceding a conjunctive! 6) "Its" is the use of a the 'word' as the POSSESSIVE and NOT the compacted form, which you MEANT to write: you should have used: "It's" 7) Oh dear..... 'loosing' when you meant 'LOSING'
3 out of 10 old son; see me after school... Tell you family you will be late home...
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Perhaps it would have been quicker to remind you about 'glasshouses' and 'stones'... But it would have been less FUN!
Kind regards
Ian
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